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Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2015 10:28 am
by Grimball4
Thanks... I always enjoy plot twists in stories, growing up with The Twilight Zone.
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2015 11:21 am
by Grimball4
Halloween Half-Pagers: There is Something Under My Bed
http://onedarkhalloweennight.com/hallow ... er-my-bed/
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2015 8:24 am
by Murfreesboro
OMG, a child's nightmare poem! Very clever.
I love these quick reads of yours. You manage to get a whole story into so few words.
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2015 11:03 am
by Grimball4
Thanks... I wish I had more time to write longer stuff, but I do love the challenge of writing a compressed story & not just telling straightforward ghost stories...
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2015 1:21 pm
by Andybev01
That is my favorite thus far.
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2015 10:42 am
by Grimball4
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2015 9:03 am
by Murfreesboro
That would be a bad commute! It reminds me of a nightmare, where you see the danger coming & can't move.
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2015 10:54 am
by Grimball4
That was what I was shooting for, a dream like situation, the next story will be even more like that. I feel that dreams are like short stories that don't make sense but often set a mood...
PGG
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2015 8:41 am
by Murfreesboro
That can be true. Some of my dreams actually have a narrative quality.
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2015 11:19 am
by Grimball4
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2015 8:58 am
by Murfreesboro
Oooh, creepy!
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2015 10:55 am
by Grimball4
Thanks!!!
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2015 11:48 pm
by Grimball4
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2015 7:29 am
by Murfreesboro
I love that last sentence!
Re: Halloween Half-Pagers
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2015 12:17 am
by Grimball4
Thanks... The little haunted house that could...